Hi I’m Shun.
I study English in Australia as a student, because I will enter the university in 2019.
My purpose is very simple to pass the exam of uni.
As you can see my English skill is not good, so I struggle to study English every day.
I will try to write blog periodically.
See ya!!
Shun
Shun, congratulations on your first blog post!
I am very hopeful that you will achieve your goal of becoming a uni student in Australia, if you continue the hard work. In fact, you are so much ahead of other students, because you already know what skills you need for acquiring English proficiency. Also remember to have fun along the journey.
I am looking forward to reading your upcoming blog posts. Hiro
Hi Shun,
My name is Hajime. Nice to meet you too! What are you going to study in Australia? I am looking forward to reading your blog!!
Thank you for your message.
I’m going to study about physiotherapy.
Cheers
Hi Shun, here is my suggestion for re-writing your post.
“Hi I’m Shu. I am currently studying English in Australia as a student so that I can enter a university in 2019. My goal this year is simply to pass the university entrance exam. I hope to improve my English skills, but I struggle with English language every day. I will try to write a post often. Thank you for reading my article. Shun”