How’s going mate?
Today I’m going to write about the recent topic.
I went to Bruno Mars concert in Perth. It was super awesome!! I’m going to introduce him for those who don’t know him. He is a American singer songwriter who was born in Hawaii.His father was a musician, so he has started to play the instrument since he was born.He is a thoroughbred. Actually I liked him before I went to his concert but now I really love him.It means that music, dance and performance are perfect. I’m crazy about him! Recently I always listen to music haha.And I was surprised at things while the concert. Audience danced when he sung a song.It was totally different from Japan.In Japan audience just crap hands.I’ve never seen dancing people in Japan.It was very interesting for me.Of cause I also danced, but my friends said my dancing was terrible!! I have to learn from Bruno Mars!!
By the way, now I have a cold.It’s easy for me to get sick when the seasons are changing.I feel to change the season.
Take care and thank for reading my blog.
Sounds like the show was fun! I am happy for you. You told me before, you would get sick when seasons change, and you are now sick. Thanks for letting us know the seasons are changing by sacrificing your health.
Below are the grammatical mistakes.
(1) the recent topics.
(2) born in Hawaii between Peter Hernandez and Bernadette. << I understand what you mean but I have never seen this expression before. You might be right though. (3) His father was musician (4) started playing instrument since he was born. (5) Recently I always listen to his music (6) I was surprised at things while the concert. (7) Audience are danced when he sung a song. (8) In Japan audience are just crap hands. (9) I've never seen dancing in Japan. (10) I'm feeling to change the seasons.
PS: The title “Hooligans”… why?
HI Hiro. Thank you for telling me mistakes.I revised my article. Hooligans which means his band member. They are also amazing. They can play the instrument and dancing.